rewrite of order # 82651893 10 pgs + 1 reference pg = 11 pas
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rewrite of order # 82651893 10 pgs + 1 reference pg = 11 pas. APA 7th formate double spaced Times Roman 12 pt font. Must incorporate the feedback into the current paper. Paper needs to give credit to Park and Burgess with the theory of concentric zones. There needs to be more citations provided in text and associated with the correct statements. Need to mention Sampson and Groves (1989) which is a fundamental work for social disorganization with the introduction of collective efficacy. Need to remove the information about Arkansas rates at a county level. The unit of analyses for social disorganization is neighborhoods and not counties. Use another example with neighborhoods preferably in Texas. The feed back states that there is a disjuncture between the response provided and how the theory should be applied. The current paper reflects important points but with some glaring omissions. Paper mentioned several studies but did not tell the reader what those studies were. Paper mentions criticisms of the theory but provided no sources. Paper mentions other studies but provides no references. Almost all references in the paper come from the same source. Needs more support from contemporary studies peer related. The feedback states that the current paper relies on quotations to the point of losing structural integrity of the writing. Paper needs more references through tracing the history of the theory. Feed back states poor writing, grammatical errors throughout the current paper and graduate level of sophistication. Needs to be Master level quality. Reliance on quotations points to a lack of understanding and the writers voice does not come through at all. Please have the writer contact me if they have any questions about these instructions.